Thursday 19 December 2019

Haiku

L.I to make a poem.
For task 3 we had to make a poem about taking the first step on the moon. We had to be creative because we were making poems. We could make any type of poem. I made a haiku that is about taking the first step on the moon. For me if I really did step on the moon it would be amazing but weird because I never done it before.

2 comments:

  1. Kia ora Texas,

    It is lovely meeting you! I am so excited that you are joining us for the Summer Learning Journey 2019-2020. Have you done this programme before?

    This is my first year joining the Summer Learning Journey, and I am so excited that I get to read over the Manaiakalani blogs.

    I’m really looking forward to summer, aren't you? In my spare time I like spending time at the beach and hanging out with my friends. I also enjoy going for walks and I absolutely love cooking and baking. What are you looking forward to doing this summer?

    You did a fantastic job describing what it would feel like if you were on the moon. I love the way you use rhyme through a Haiku. Very creative! :)

    I really liked the colour and image you used to present your poem. Ka pai!

    I have often thought about what it would be like to travel into space. I think if I had the opportunity to go there, I would probably stay because I'd miss my friends and family so much! Neil Armstrong was so brave going to the moon.

    If you had the opportunity, would you go to the moon? I think the view would be phenomenal!

    Noho ora mai
    Erica

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  2. Hi Texas!
    This activity you did was great. Remember to re read your text as it might not make sense. What was the hardest part of this activity?
    Blog you later!
    ~ Florence

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